Blog Topic #3 Syntax
- “He didn't answer”(119).
- “A pause”(120). “I hesitated” (120). “That was it. I'd never understood before”(120).
The rekindling of love between Gatsby and Daisy reaches to such a height that Tom soon starts to notice. The short terse statements mimic the high tension that is present when a surge of realization reaches Tom. Afraid to express much, all of them feel awkward talking about thus realization. The telegraphic sentences showcase the gravity of the situation and the refusal to say much in fear of retaliation.
- “'Left no address?' 'No.' 'Say when they'd be back?' 'No.' 'Any idea where they are?' How could I reach them?' 'I don't know. Can't say'”(164).
The syntax used here in the responses they both give signify hopelessness of ever fining Daisy or Tom again. Short terse responses correspond to the abrupt end of communication between any of them. The telegraphic responses are used to express the lack of longevity of Gatsby's life.
'' 'I am careful .' 'No you're not.' 'Well, other people are, she said lightly.' she said lightly. 'what's that got to do with it?'” (58).
Fitzgerald's purpose here is to dive into the relationship of the cousins, Nick and Daisy. Not only is there lack of depth between the two, but they seem to lack and understanding for each other.
I too took note of Fitzgerald's utilization of telegraphic sentences. As you pointed out, he uses them to "mimic the high tension" and also to transmit a sense of sudden abruptness, and exactitude to the reader. It is a versatile use of syntax in that it can be used in emphasizing awkward or uncomfortable situations, as well as to convey urgency.
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